Final Draft - Descriptive Writing - My Mum

WALT to write a description of our mum using precise words to create an image in our readers minds.

I am going to introduce you to someone special…

My Mum’s name is Erina she is kind , supportive and a loyal role model. 

She wears red and purplish glasses, she has night sky brown hair , freckles like me , brown glittering eyes and she always wears black pants and a tidy bun on top of her head when she goes to work. Whenever she is going to a party she always wears her pretty dresses.

This is what she does and does not do ...

She likes doing exercise , drinking smoothies , doing jobs and cooking dinner. My mum loves plants she has them all over the house because she is a crazy plant lady. She loves to watch New Amsterdam on Netflix. My Mum works at blessings for life so she looks after kids all day and night.

What we like to do together, why my mum is the best mum ever

I like it when we have ice cream together even milo's too. I love it when we have biscuits do baking, and fold the clothes. I love it when she makes stuff for us like our silver money boxes. My mum is always there for us that is why she is the BEST MUM EVER.